After watching this pitch and waiting 5 minutes, here is what I remember from it: - Helping the environment - Solar panels - Sitting down, weird lighting I love the fact that you are going the environmental optimist route. I encourage you to practice your pitch with these things in mind: - People want to hear how this specifically affects them, so even if that means shrinking your net, narratives will win out over generalizations - Try to get the point of your product across in the fewest possible amount of words - Everyone can benefit from trying to court attention, even if it means being outrageous or controversial This stuff isn't easy, but you can totally hit a home run- Godspeed
I could be wrong, but I thought your elevator pitch was supposed to be about the product we wrote our hypotheses on and conducted our interviews about. If it wasn't, then I think you did a great job, besides sitting down and maybe including more emotion. The overall idea is good and relevant but including some statistics about climate change would probably help motivate the investors.
After watching this pitch and waiting 5 minutes, here is what I remember from it:
ReplyDelete- Helping the environment
- Solar panels
- Sitting down, weird lighting
I love the fact that you are going the environmental optimist route. I encourage you to practice your pitch with these things in mind:
- People want to hear how this specifically affects them, so even if that means shrinking your net, narratives will win out over generalizations
- Try to get the point of your product across in the fewest possible amount of words
- Everyone can benefit from trying to court attention, even if it means being outrageous or controversial
This stuff isn't easy, but you can totally hit a home run- Godspeed
Christian,
ReplyDeleteI could be wrong, but I thought your elevator pitch was supposed to be about the product we wrote our hypotheses on and conducted our interviews about. If it wasn't, then I think you did a great job, besides sitting down and maybe including more emotion. The overall idea is good and relevant but including some statistics about climate change would probably help motivate the investors.