You are right, your posture and hand movements help in this video instead of hinder when it comes to the quality of your pitch. The one big thing that stuck out to me as a item important to develop on is the fact that I am being told about what your company can do, but I do not come away from the pitch with any name to keep in my mind. Even if you haven't decided on a name for your group yet, you could use a placeholder or something, at the very least. Now that I am bringing this up, I don't think I mentioned the name of my company either. Maybe it's because we don't have a website or LLC for a specific entity yet, but still, we should leave viewers with a name to remember. Also, I think increasing your energy level a little will help with your sell.
You are right, your posture and hand movements help in this video instead of hinder when it comes to the quality of your pitch. The one big thing that stuck out to me as a item important to develop on is the fact that I am being told about what your company can do, but I do not come away from the pitch with any name to keep in my mind. Even if you haven't decided on a name for your group yet, you could use a placeholder or something, at the very least. Now that I am bringing this up, I don't think I mentioned the name of my company either. Maybe it's because we don't have a website or LLC for a specific entity yet, but still, we should leave viewers with a name to remember. Also, I think increasing your energy level a little will help with your sell.
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