22A - Elevator Pitch No. 3


https://imgur.com/a/kmVye9N

I received feedback that I was actually moving around too much so I toned that down and to also slow down my speaking speed.

I did find myself to be much more comfortable in front of the camera.

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  1. ChipperApril 5, 2020 at 11:04 PM

    Hey Christian,

    I would agree that you definitely seemed more comfortable in front of the camera and everything seemed to flow pretty well for the most part. You got your message across and it was really interesting to hear how you were selling your idea to potential investors. While other feedback may have mentioned that you were moving around too much, I would suggest that you stand up and move a little as it appeared like you were mainly sitting.

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  2. Sebastian RiversApril 6, 2020 at 3:59 AM

    Hi there Christian,

    I believe it says a lot that you were so willing to make the necessary changes to improve your elevator pitch. I remember watching you first 2 pitches, and while they were good (and the second one was better than the first one) the third one was much more refined, and i believe it is due to you listening to the comments.

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